I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hey Thomas, it is Matthew, this is a really nice job but for you name you have to put a capital letter, and also add a background and the prinester you don't have to say that she is weird you can keep that to yourself because anybody in the world can see that and maybe Jacinda ardern can see it your blog post. On the rest you did a really really nice job Thomas!
Kumusta Thomas, You did a great job on this post! Next time just remember to put a capital letter for your name. I remember doing this in class. I liked how you put a title! Also next time you could also put more writing Well Byee
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Hey Thomas,
ReplyDeleteit is Matthew,
this is a really nice job but for you name you have to put a capital letter, and also add a background and the prinester you don't have to say that she is weird you can keep that to yourself because anybody in the world can see that and maybe Jacinda ardern can see it your blog post. On the rest you did a really really nice job Thomas!
Kumusta Thomas,
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job on this post! Next time just remember to put a capital letter for your name. I remember doing this in class. I liked how you put a title! Also next time you could also put more writing
Well Byee